Lee Marc Stein

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How to spur your audience into taking action on your direct marketing offer by getting them mad!

Direct Marketing Copywriting: Get Them Mad!

You know the other line in the famous Dylan Thomas couplet - "Rage, rage against the dying of the light." In direct mail, we call the dying of the light I-N-E-R-T-I-A. We can't get prospects for our products and services to switch from their current source, or even to inquire about the possibility of switching.

This is not the kind of inertia that's easily solved with direct marketing calls to action like "Act now," "Call today." Those calls to action help - particularly if they're tied into a strong benefit for acting or dire consequence for not acting - but the problem is much more deep-routed.

What's the Cause? What Can You Do?
The culprit is commoditization. Most of the time, consumers (be it in the personal or business spheres) perceive no differences between products/services in a category. Or, and this may be even worse, they don't want to think about the category at all.

So what do you do to make prospects "move off the dime"? Well, you could BRIBE them with a premium - particularly if none of your competitors is doing that. In a recent edition of "Editor's Notebook," Hallie Mummert indeed reports that premium use is on the rise. You'd need to test what you'd have to spend on the premium to boost the response rates significantly enough, and also what offering that premium does to net sales. Maybe your particular operation needs a lot more leads than you have been getting, but can stand a lower conversion rate from leads to sales.

You could run a giveaway or a sweepstakes. That certainly takes attention away from your product/service and from the category. If it's a generic/umbrella sweepstakes and the prizes in no way relate to what you do, that's even better of course.

Humor might be the inertia-breaker in some circumstances. Everyone recalls the famous National Lampoon Magazine effort with the message to the effect of "If you don't renew now, we'll shoot your dog." Your eyes really can't glaze over something like that, can they? The problem is that humor can work in broadcast and perhaps online, but most of the time doesn't translate to direct mail.

Make Someone Mad Today!
What does all this have to do with the Dylan Thomas couplet? The advice when you really want to do to skyrocket attention in your low-interest category is "Do not mail GENTLE." To differentiate in a commodity situation, GET YOUR PROSPECTS SCREAMING, STEAMING MAD! Not at you, of course, but at the situation, at your competitors, at the previous lack of a solution before you came along.

Of course, raising hackles is the modus operandum of political direct mail. You generate more and higher contributions by getting recipients angry at the other candidate and what he/she stands for, not by talking positively about your candidate's accomplishments and platform. Political magazines make hay with the "make someone mad today" mantra.

Other fundraisers should think about using anger in their appeals. Aren't you angry that there are still millions of Americans without enough food to eat? Isn't it terrible that more and more children are being diagnosed with autism?

We can move this anger strategy to the business-to-business world. Suppose you were selling Help Desk support to IT Managers. The outer envelope might play into their naturally foul moods with copy like

"Mutter, mutter. They cut my budget and turn up the flow of work orders. Mutter, mutter. The harder I work the more problems I seem to get hit with. Mutter, mutter."

"Mutter, mutter. Even the software solutions I read about seem to make my job tougher. Mutter, mutter. Months to install, expensive training, kills my budget."

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Then consider using anger in consumer product or service appeals. Take automobile insurance (please). It's decidedly low interest; most drivers don't have an option; and buyers don't see much difference between companies. GEICO made the distinction years ago: you either buy through an agent or buy direct. That's muddied now because many carriers go both ways.

So if you're with a company specializing in insuring safe, responsible drivers, you need to get your prospects stirred up. Otherwise, they will stay with their current carrier (it's the safe thing to do). Get your prospects MAD at -

  • Drivers who are irresponsible and cause accidents

  • Insurers of these irresponsible drivers. These companies presumably charge higher premiums to make up for all the accidents

  • Carriers and agents who try to make it very complicated to switch insurers when it isn't at all

Know When to Stop and What to Do Next
There are some key things to know about inciting anger:

1. You'd better choose the right flash point. Trying to get someone angry about a matter of no concern will backfire. Talk to your prospects. Consider attitudinal overlays.

2. The "get mad" strategy is just an attention grabber. Use it, then move on.

3. What you should move to is a strong benefit message. In the case of auto insurance, it will definitely be SAVING ON PREMIUMS. You'll want to position the savings as the reward for taking action on the anger.

Lee Marc Stein is a direct marketing consultant and copywriter with 40+ years experience in strategy and creative development. Lee creates lead generation programs, writes direct response advertising that generates orders and traffic, and advises clients on how to increased lifetime value of a customer. He has extensive experience in insurance and financial services, publishing, software and nonprofit marketing. Lee taught at NYU and Hofstra, and has spoken at 100+ industry conferences. His web site www.leemarcstein.com offers a free eletter and additional articles.

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